Tom-White's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alice vs. The Tweedles]

nice work.

Great artwork, decent animation, good vioiceovers and choice of sound. It was strange though... wierd...earie...turnips.

If your from the Britain, hold it up 4 UK flash, if your not and got the voiceovers elsewhere then boo!

[BattleGalactica]

Nice work.

Despite the abrupt ending and 'to be COCluded'. This was great. An amazing piece of flash, especially for a second movie. Your style of art work is good and the sound fitted the storyline well. However, I fell it needed to be faster flowing in some parts and dragged on sightly for what actually happened. The animation was substandard and can be improved. But it is still decent for your first 'non stick' movie.

Improve these small points and you will get 10s. You have great potential for when you are more experienced with flash.

Nice one.

[Darkstrike BeginningPart2]

good work.

It's clear to see you spent time on this and it was well drawn and animated. However you would score more highly if you used voice overs instead of subtitles. Also sometimes I fealt that the music didn't realy suit what was happening in the story, but most of it was spot on.

A good effort. I look forward to watching more.

[Randomly Fun! 2.0]

randomly fun indeed.

I dont know about the stick having a fucking wank, but the rest was good. It took a while to get going but in the end it turned out alright.

Safe.

JCastillo responds:

Thanks.

["The Box"]

A nice short.

This was realy well done. Great, first class animation. The only problem with it was the gags. They weren't terrible, just a bit dry and overdone.

Anyway, keep up the nice work.

[NG Time Trial Challenge B]

Fight!

rocky pinicle wins

FLAWLESS VICTORY!

[June 6 D-Day (unfinished)]

nice but..

why submit something if it isnt finnished? You should finnish this then resubmit it. It's just a waist to submit half cut work.

[Erik the Juiceman Short#1]

jokes

Yer that was great. It's realy well made because you don't laugh until the end when you've taken it all in. Thats damn good comedy. Most of the laughs on NG these days happen when a character takes a shit. But you've made a genuinely funny one here.

I also liked the animation and manga style art work. The sound fitted well and the voice acting was great.

I hardly ever write reviews as good as this, but this movie realy did hit the right note. Nice!

Make more!

[MJ Secrets]

Im neutral on the whole jacko thing..

but that was damn funny. Simple and sweet. Fuck the people who are taking this so seriously..its as funny as fuck!

Mouth movements could have used work & could have been longer... but apart from that it was all good.