Tom-White's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bill On A Mission - Part2]

nice

well made stuff there. The matrix idea is a bit over done, but it's clear you spent time on it.

[to the max]

heh.. k

k, the animation was crap.
The Voice overs were very good, and they were funny.
Too many references to strawberry clock being a cool, when everyone knows he suckith dick.

Genrally ok idea I suppose. Just improve on those graphics and animation.

tabokangdo responds:

gee thatks for the tips

[Ink.]

too short.

It may be a teaser, but it's still way too short. It tells us hardly anything about your actual movie. Improve on your flash skills and animation before making the finnished product.

This needs a lot of work to be a success.

MentalImpandencypr responds:

I'm now officialy sending messages to users.Its a teaser yes but basicly its my lamer cartoon.Normaly I make ignorance but I decided to try my hands on some seriousness.And the animation is like that for a reason.The charrie lives in an old black and white cartoon world with absolutely no color of flavor to the world.So far its a bomb unfortunately so I'm giving you all utter ignorance as it see,s to be candy for this darwin world.

[Funny Joke!!]

kinda funny

Yeh ok idea, but there was no need to have buttons between each part of the joke. An ok flash though.It deserves to survive.

[Fruitworks - Preview]

ok

not a bad idea for a preview and it went well with the music. Buuuut it needed to be longer and have something more to it, so you better make the actual thing good.

Syrinj responds:

I'm currently working on the screenwriting and ideas for it. The actual thing WILL be much better. I just don't know if I'll ever get to producing it.

[Graffiti Slideshow 2]

not a good idea.

not a good idea for a flash, the file size was WAY to big for what it actually was. A good choice in sound although it was glitchy.

But the bottom line is, any moron can make a simple slideshow and put it on newgrounds. So whats the point?

[I Love Egg ep.6]

i've watched all 7.

And there all excelent. The best is probably episode 4, that was realy funny.
Your cartoons are very origional and your animation perfect. I hope you go on to make much much more!

[Super-rap-boy 2]

too short

u should have made it longer, the animation was no good, and nothing much realy happend. Keep trying tho, if you remake this it could be good. To resyncronise, ajust the frame rate.

[NOTSD P4 Trailer]

looks like its going to be good.

lol, excellent gorey detail. This looks great, using sticks is mabe not the best idea, but it'll do. Excellent teaser the sound suited it excellently.

Im looking forwards to the full thing.

Nice one.

[Beast Animation(preview)]

this was good.

Well thought out and made stuff. Nice smooth graphics and fight sequences. It looks like it should develop into something good.

But it was a bit too short and as 'loky' said needs background music. But apart from that it was a great job. Go ahead and bring out part 2.